Food city
Walt: Write 100 words in 10 minutes.
For this week we have been learning how to write 100 words in 10 minutes.
I think I did A very funny story. maybe I could add more writing.
Once upon a time there lived four siblings named Ryan, Rollan, Kryzma, and Manaia. Ryan was a sorcerer Rollan was a genie Kryzma was a queen she was the Big Mac queen and Manaia well she was just dark and was pretty much in her own world the queen of everyone. They lived in a rich town filled with heaps of strange people. Such as Amber was a talking banana Awa was talking doughnut police and Kavelle the pizza boy. Oh and please don't forget Kryzmas Army of the big mac people. Everyone and everything was basically food until their King Bob was taken away. Then the food people were raided by the Pakehas and their dogs ate everyone’s houses. The food people tried fighting back but then the king Cyris unleashed the Scottish people. Whos leader was kavelle. Then the Scottish ate everyone.
HI Cyris it's Kryzma. I like how you explained to us about your story but maybe next time add capital letter's for names. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteHi Cyris,
ReplyDeleteWell done for sharing your story you wrote in 10 minutes, your characters are interesting. Maybe next time you could get your story checked for punctuation and correct grammar. Keep up the good effort.