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Friday, March 20, 2020

This is just to say


This is just to say I have eaten the sweets

That were in the fridge and what you were probably wanting to eat.

Forgive me, they were so sweet, so tempting and so delicious.


by William, Carlos and Cyris.
                                     


 

3 comments:

  1. I really like your poem Cyris. The photo you have chosen is very eye catching and drew my attention in!

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  2. Ka pai Cyris I enjoyed reading your This is just to say poem and the thought you put into creating an interesting poem. Keep up the good work,
    Ms Peters

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  3. This is a nice poem about candy I hope you can make more.thanks Dion paroa school.

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